I am writing a personal statement for university application. And I want to demonstrate that some experience let me be interested in this subject. These experiences are about work, internship and other social activities. So, I want to know which sentence is correct?

  1. my experience in internship, work and social activities relating to business allowed me to became interested in business analytics.
  2. my experience of internship, work and social activities relating to business allowed me to became interested in business analytics.
  3. my experience with internship, work and social activities relating to business allowed me to became interested in business analytics.
  • They are all possible, but "experience" selects mostly "of", followed by "in", followed by "with". See here: link
    – BillJ
    Oct 20, 2019 at 6:58
  • Incidentally, you have a few mistakes and weaknesses in the wording, some of which are pointed out in the answer below. Also, "university application" requires a determiner such as "my". Further, the verb should be "become", not "became".
    – BillJ
    Oct 20, 2019 at 7:12

3 Answers 3


Let me first point out that it is not the preposition that you should be primarily concerned about. Your sentence has other flaws - if this is your personal statement for university admission, you need to fix them. In this kind of situations, it is better to be bulletproof in your writing.

My experience [in/of/with] internship, work and social activities relating to business allowed me to became interested in business analytics.

The sentence is very vague - "experience in internship and work"? Internship is work too. If it is unpaid, then make that distinction - internship and paid work.

It is better to say what exactly it is that you have experience [in/with] - (a) specialized topic or field (financial accounting, marketing, taxes, business law, etc.), (b) tools (business software, database management, etc.), or (c) doing something (managing and organizing events/meetings, consulting clients, making coffee, etc.)

Also, a better alternative to "... and social activities relating to business" would be "business-related social activities". Again, in my opinion, this is a bit vague. What were these business-related social activities - potlucks? If so, then mention it. Were they advertising campaigns, charity events (CSR?), or awareness programs?

If you have already mentioned these in detail in previous paragraphs, then you don't really need to say "internship, work and social activities relating to business" - you can just say "my professional experiences allowed me ..."

A. Preposition: in

When we refer to a specialized sector, area, topic, or field of knowledge, we generally use "in"

Their experience in marketing and promotion has brought excellent results (Cambridge).

She has ten years’ experience in television and radio. (usually followed by a noun)(Cambridge).

... experience in fashion design, ... experience in data modelling, ... experience in financial accounting ...

This post Experience in/ with / no preposition in ELL by Yuri says

"Experience in" implies the person has been (professionally) trained in something (a special field of activity)...

B. Preposition: with

When we say we are good at using something (a tool), we often use "with". "With" is also used when the object is a noun.

I have 3 years' experience working with Adobe Photoshop.

I have 4 years' experience working with children.

... experience with Java, ... experience working with a wide range of statistical software, ... experience with computers.

This post Experience/Experienced: “With” or “In”? in EL&U says

I have experience / I am experienced + with + general noun (cars, animals, etc.)

This post “experience in” VS “experience with” in ELL has a great answer by Astralbee on the use of "in" and "with": A farmer works in a field with a plough.

C. Preposition: of

"Of" is often followed by situations or specific types of occurrence - Free dictionary forum.

After 'of', we mainly use gerund unless the word 'experience' is preceded by get/gain - by Yuri in Experience in/ with / no preposition

Do you have any experience of working with heavy machinery (Cambridge)?

Do you have any previous experience of working with children? (usually followed by the -ing form of a verb)(Cambridge).

The use of the prepositions is not enforced strictly, I think. We mix it up often when we speak. Then there is the matter of how they may vary between AmE and BrE. There is a comment by JavaLatte in Yuri's post: "According to NGram, there is a significant difference in usage of "have experience X" where X is a preposition, between BrE (of >> in > with) and Ame (in > with >> of)."

All three - "in", "of", or "with" - can be used with "experience". However, all three prepositions cannot be used interchangeably in your context without changing the wording of the sentence.

As I said, the use of "internship, work..." is very vague to me. "Internship" and "work" are not fields, and I don't think we can use "in".

My experience of a 16-month internship program allowed me to ...

My experience of working with the Finance team is what made me interested in ...

My experience in project management (gained during my internship or work term) sparked my interest ...

  • Thank you for your advice. It's the last sentence of the first paragraph, and I mentioned details of some experience in following paragraphs. In this case, is that necessary to write what the experiences exactly are?
    – caslt
    Oct 20, 2019 at 6:07
  • That is all the more reason why you should edit the sentence, in my opinion. If you are discussing the details in the later paragraphs, you can make a general statement in the closing sentence of your first paragraph. "General" does not mean vague though - make it powerful. Cutting out "internship, work and social activities relating to business" will save you space to fit in better words. You can say, for example, "... my professional experiences ... sparked my interest in business analytics ..." or something of that sort.
    – AIQ
    Oct 20, 2019 at 6:31

My experience in/ of / with internship, work and social activities relating to business allowed me to became interested in business analytics

I think all the prepositions are correct in the context. The mistake seems to be allowed me to became.It should be corrected as become.

I referred to many dictionaries and experience is followed by in, of and with.

Here is the link which shows the usage.



I would say:

My internship, work and extracurricular experiences all contributed to my interest in business analytics.

Extracurricular activities are activities outside of work or study.

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