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Do I need to place a comma in this sentence? And is the word order correct?

Supporting guidance on 'Fair trading requirements' advises that discrimination in regard to the costs of the goods and services against owners wishing to obtain a written prescription is forbidden.

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Comma after discrimination and after prescription but note that this is still wordy and does not flow as a sentence.

Try Supporting guidance on 'Fair trading requirements' advises that discrimination is forbidden in regard to the costs of the goods and services, against those owners who wish to obtain a written prescription.

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