These are the opening sentences of the first chapter of a book I'm writing on wattpad.
I’ve always been waiting.
I waited for many things - maybe even everything.
In queues to our canteen’s food stalls, for trains and late buses, toilets, ticket booths, exams and their results, everything, and everything else. The list just goes on and on, really.
I wanted to emphasize the waiting but I do realize that I may have been repeating too many things on these bits. I had a number of people read it (I didn't specifically ask for opinions in this part) and no one has complained so far but I'm wonder whether I should adjust this part or just leave it as is.
What would you suggest?