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In one of my posts I said

I can imagine 2 possibilities about the figure 10%, a widely recognized rule or an intuition, which one is true?

I was trying to say there are 2 possible explanation I can imagine about an statement, A or B and I'd like to know which one is correct.

Is it idiomatic to say "there are 2 possibilities ... which one is true" in this case? Could someone please give a hint? Thanks in advance.

Consider another case

Alice is crying. There are 3 possibilities, she was fired, her boyfriend punched her or her boyfriend had done with her and left her, which one is true?

Is it idiomatic to state multiple explanations that way?

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    Can you add more details? I checked the link in your question. This one is basically just a copy of the other one. It is not at all clear what you want to know. "Which one is true?" should be a separate sentence from the rest of it, if that is what you're asking. I see nothing "idiomatic" about it. But I may not understand correctly since the situation of your question is very unclear. Apr 8 '20 at 3:21
  • @SarahBowman Thank you. Let me try it again. I just updated the OP.
    – WXJ96163
    Apr 8 '20 at 3:45
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    Your question would be more clear with the word "either" along with some punctuation and a few more words. "I can imagine 2 possibilities about the figure 10%: either it is a widely recognized rule, or it is based on intuition. Which of these possibilities is true?"
    – SarahT
    Apr 8 '20 at 4:22
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    @WXJ96163 I think the way your OP looks now is fine. You tie it all together in wanting to know how to list several possibilities. Two examples helps clarify your question, in my opinion. Apr 8 '20 at 5:04
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    @WXJ96163 you can use "either...or" with more than two things.
    – SarahT
    Apr 8 '20 at 5:17
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I'm not sure what you mean by "idiomatic."

According to Google Search, the definition of idiomatic that best applies is:

using, containing, or denoting expressions that are natural to a native speaker.

If this is your intended meaning, I think you are asking whether in normal everyday speech a person would utter those speeches like one sentence, with only commas between the various phrases. No, I don't think so.

Let me explain. It is almost impossible to replicate spoken language exactly in writing. People have been trying for ages. Part of the problem is that every individual speaker has their own unique way of speaking. Another part of the problem is that every individual listener has their own unique way of perceiving the sounds and punctuations of sound as they are uttered. To overcome these problems, we have formalized the writing of dialogue to be as close as possible to spoken language, yet understandable without the sound of the human voice.

Where you put commas there would definitely be pauses in spoken language. Would they be periods or only commas? It depends on who is speaking and how the listener determines periods vs commas in spoken language.

Writing It

The way you have written those speeches is incorrect for written language. To be easily understood in writing, you need different punctuation.

Example 1

I can imagine 2 possibilities about the figure 10%, a widely recognized rule or an intuition. I can imagine Statement A and also Statement B. Which one is true? (I would say: Which one is correct?)

Example 2

Alice is crying. There are 3 possibilities: she was fired, her boyfriend punched her, or her boyfriend was done with her and left her. Which one is true?

The Question

As you can see, in both examples a period needs to be placed at the end of the list of options or possibilities. "Which one is true?" is a separate sentence or question from the rest of the speech. The speech consists of three parts:

  • introductory line, e.g. "there are three possibilities."
  • the list of possibilities
  • the question: Which is true?

"Which is true?" is neither the introductory line, nor one of the items on the list of possibilities. It has its own subject and verb; it stands alone.

Colon & M-Dash

In Example 2, the sentence "There are three possibilities" is complete in and of itself. If one were taking notes in class, it would look as follows.

There are three possibilities:

  1. she was fired
  2. her boyfriend punched her
  3. her boyfriend was done with her and left her

Perhaps you can see why a colon is needed; "There are three possibilities" introduces the list. It uses the present tense "are." The phrases that follows are the items in the list and use past tense: was, punched, was. (See what I did there? I used the colon, too, to set off the list. It's the way we do it.)

When writing it as dialogue, you might use the m-dash thus:

Jane said to Mary, "Alice was crying. I can think of three possibilities--maybe she got fired, or maybe her boyfriend punched her again, or maybe he was done with her and left her."

You will notice that I changed the wording a bit to make it sound more normal for concerned friends to be discussing Alice's distress. That does not affect the punctuation; it just makes for a more natural story. You will note that in this dialogue the m-dash replaces the colon. Colons are too formal for dialogue, especially informal dialogue among friends. A professor in a lecture or a lawyer in explaining one's legal options might speak with a colon in his voice, but not friends.

Is it idiomatic to state multiple explanations that way?

In my opinion, it is not okay to write it that way. If you are asking if it is okay to speak that way when in verbal communication with someone, then my answer is: Yes, that sounds okay when speaking.

Maybe I should have asked you to also explain what you mean by "idiomatic." Somehow, I thought I'd know when I looked it up in the dictionary. Now I'm not sure.

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  • Your answer is very informative. Thank you, that's very kind of you. I guess I made a mistake. I thought those two sentences are acceptable both in speaking and writhing. With you help, I realize that the second one is not okay for writing. Although I have no idea why is that. Should I put it forward in a new post?
    – WXJ96163
    Apr 8 '20 at 9:38
  • My mistake. I have now edited my answer and written an explanation for the changes. If you have further questions, feel free to ask. Apr 8 '20 at 12:34

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