Does this sentence look natural to native speaker? Is there any other better way to rephrase this sentence. I feel my sentence is a Little redundant
Repetition like this very rarely looks/sounds right in prose, and even in poetry and song only the sounds normally repeat, rather than specific words.
I would probably write this as:
[Specific people] can see how people from different places live their lives ...
Where the square brackets might be
Foreigners or something appropriate to your specific scenario.