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I am trying to reach out to someone on Twitter to ask their opinions on a product they bought.

Does it sound natural & grammatically correct to say "I wonder what your thoughts on it"?

How about "I wonder what your thoughts are about this product"?

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I wonder what your thoughts are about this product.

This is grammatically correct. The ordering feels a bit off to me – I'd prefer the “are” to go at the end – but that preference feels weak enough to be just my dialect.

To answer the first question:

I wonder what your thoughts on it are.

The simplest sentence of this form is “I wonder what it is.”. I feel like it breaks down like this, though I couldn't possibly tell you why:

┌ wonder ┬─────────.
I        what ┬─ is
              it

(I wonder (what it is)).

jr_kim's answer, “I wonder what are your thoughts about this product” isn't incorrect per se, but it's a non-standard dialect; it's not formal, written English, and some might consider it a little odd. With different punctuation to make it a question with a preceding subordinate clause, however:

I wonder, what are your thoughts about this product?

it's perfectly grammatically correct.

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  • Thanks for the reply! Learned a lot! – Joji Jun 24 at 17:03
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I would go with: "I wonder what are your thoughts about this product"

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    Thanks jr_km, I agree that is the answer. For this to be a great answer, could you explain why the word "are" is needed, and why it goes there and not (for example) at the end or after "thoughts". – James K Jun 23 at 19:38
  • Thank you James K for the comment. I am sorry if my answer was not great. I was aiming more for the "sounds naturally" and less "grammatically correct". – jr_km Jun 23 at 19:57
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    Hi thanks for the reply. Not to be nitpicking but shouldn't it be "I wonder what your thoughts are about this product"? – Joji Jun 23 at 20:06
  • @Joji Quite right, unless you phrase it as a question, as in: "I wonder... what are your thoughts about this product?" – TypeIA Jun 23 at 21:42

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