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I have two sentences here but I'm not sure if I write them correctly. And this is my first time trying to use be to + infinitive in the sentence 2 so I'm not sure if I used it right. Please see the following:

  1. "She wanted to thoroughly clean up the house in-and-out"

and

  1. "We were to have played computer game after the lunch, and now we were sadly mopping our room."

or

  1. "We would have played computer game originally, and now we were sadly mopping our room."

Is the grammar correct?

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In sentence 1:
She wanted to thoroughly clean up the house in-and-out.

I think ", inside and outside", preceded by a comma, would be more idiomatic than "in-and-out".

In sentence 2, the use of "were to have played" is correct, but it's uncommon. It might be better to use "would have".

With singular "game", you need an article: "a computer game". If you use the plural "computer games", you don't need the article.

In sentence 2, the conjunction "but" would fit better:
"We would have played a computer game after lunch, but now we were sadly mopping our room."

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