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which sentence is correct and Why:

Sentence 1 : This aims to help people part buy a house or a flat by making housing more affordable for first-time buyers,and possibly taking the strain away form elderly parents.

Sentence 2 : This aims to help people part buy a house or a flat by making housing more affordable for first-time buyers,and possibly takes the strain away form elderly parents.

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  • It's just a matter of whether you're linking taking to preceding by making OR takes to preceding This aims. Both are perfectly credible, and it's not obvious to me there's any point in trying to identify some difference in "nuance of meaning". Personally I have no particular preference one way or the other - use whichever you like best. Oct 5, 2020 at 16:11
  • I think the word "part" should not be in either sentence.
    – puppetsock
    Oct 6, 2020 at 0:03

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