I wrote a little poem about a snake. The last verse reveals that the snake had eaten itself during a particular night. A night I am describing before.
"I ate myself - at that night"
I really like the number of words, their sound and the context, referring to that night. But I have doubts: is that good English? Is there a better way?
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The sirens are singing
The tail speaks to me
Try, try, try, try me
I devour the life
Full of Lust and delight
I ate myself
At that night