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"You must work hard or you will not succeed in life"

How can I convert the above into simple sentence?

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    Why is the sentence you've given not simple enough? When does a sentence qualify as simple in your opinion?
    – Jeroen
    Commented Nov 9, 2020 at 13:38
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    Here is a simpler sentence: "Hard work is the key to success." Also it contains more 'carrot' than 'stick'.
    – Weather Vane
    Commented Nov 9, 2020 at 14:06

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I can kind of see what you are saying since the sentence is compound, you could say "Success comes from hard work, none of it comes from laziness."

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