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Before anyone could stop him, the boy in the wheelchair was barreling toward the laughing bullies.

Hi. I would like to know if barreling seems a good choice in this context to mean he's riding really fast in his wheelchair toward the bullies as if to attack them? Or do you have some better ones?

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That's a perfectly good use of the word! However, it dates back to the idea of a barrel rolling down a hill, and some inexperienced readers might not have heard that usage. That said, I think it's quite appropriate here, in essence, comparing the rolling wheelchair to that barrel, and I think that hypothetical reader could understand it from context.

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For some reason, I feel the need for some indication of the space being traversed. I find support for that here:

barrel ​VERB INTRANSITIVE ​INFORMAL UK 1 to move very quickly in a deliberate or determined way barrel down/into/through etc: David was barrelling down the hall towards her. https://www.macmillandictionary.com/dictionary/british/barrel_2

Thus, I personally would be more comfortable with, e.g.

the boy in the wheelchair was barrelling down the path toward the laughing bullies


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I notice that the verb is described as British. If so, then the spelling requires double "l" - "barrelling".

If however the usage is known in the US, (and your story takes place there) a single "l" is correct.

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  • The usage is known in the US. There is a sign outside of Tampa, Florida that says "Please don't barrel through" in reference to dangerous driving. :) – FeliniusRex Feb 11 at 15:39

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