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This study describes a treatment for/of a diseased kidney of a 15-year-old girl.

Which is correct (for or of). Does the rest also sounds alright or would it be better to rephrase the whole sentence?

This study describes a treatment for/of a 15-year-old girl's diseased kidney?

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    This study describes the treatment of a 15-year-old girl's diseased kidney. Yes, this is basically editing and not really allowed.
    – Lambie
    Feb 25, 2021 at 18:41
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    Prefer treatment for a disease / illness /etc & treatment of a patient / organ Treatment of an injury might go either way: The treatment for injuries to the knee is... Treatment of the patient's injury proved successful. Feb 25, 2021 at 21:52

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