I'm checking this chart's description:
There is one sentence that sounds odd
The second most popular way of making journeys in Canada is on foot.
I think that
way of making journeys doesn't sound natural.
Would it be better to write
The second most popular means of transport in Canada is on foot?
I'm also not sure about
on foot here. Is
on foot ok in a sentence like this?
It's an IELTS writing task, so the style should be academic.
Will appreciate any clarifications.