Consider the following sentence please:
We need to give young people more opportunity if we want them to grow into responsible adults.
I guess everyone who reads the text feels that giving opportunity is the main point, but I would like to put a strong emphasize on being young. Is it correct If I paraphrase like this?
We need to give people more opportunity in their youth if we want them to grow into responsible adults.
I mean, I want the reader to understand that giving chance to young people is important in my view. I mean it is important that we give people opportunities when they are young rather than adult.