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"Comma" or "and"?

Case 1:

In §2.1 and §2.2 we prove ...

or

In §2.1, §2.2 we prove ...

Case 2:

As mentioned in Section 2 (§2.1 and §2.2) ...

or

As mentioned in Section 2 (§2.1, §2.2) ...

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    I can't think of any situation where you would use a comma rather than and between just two items. Where did you get that idea from?
    – JavaLatte
    Sep 1, 2021 at 11:02
  • @JavaLatte, I am not an English native speaker (I saw only "and", but I was thinking maybe the "comma" is also ok).
    – Ben
    Sep 1, 2021 at 11:07
  • Perhaps you are thinking of 2.1, 2.2 and 2.3 where the first comma is OK?
    – mdewey
    Sep 1, 2021 at 12:30

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Replacing “and” with a comma is “Headlinese”, where normal rules of grammar are superseded by the need for brevity. You should not do this in prose like your case 1.

However, I do like parenthetical comments or references to be brief, so I might use this technique in your case 2.

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