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A) I am eager to learn more about the position, and grateful for this opportunity to meet the sales team in person.

B) I am eager to learn more about the position, and am grateful for this opportunity to meet the sales team in person.

C) I am eager to learn more about the position, and I am grateful for this opportunity to meet the sales team in person.

D) I am eager to learn more about the position and grateful for this opportunity to meet the sales team in person.

Questions:

  1. Are any of the options above grammatically incorrect?
  2. Which is the most correct?
  3. And what is this concept of a shared subject across two clauses called? Parallelism? Conjunction reduction? It seems so basic but I don't remember the term for it.
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  • I prefer A, because the relation of the predicates goes beyond their parallel structures. Jun 6, 2022 at 16:55

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I don't like B. It sounds much better if the subject is repeated.
This shorter example,

He is angry, and is waiting for you.

is not ungrammatical, but I think it is improved by repeating the subject:

He's angry, and he's waiting for you.

Personally, I prefer example C, though I would contract "I am" to "I'm" in both places.

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