For an exam answer, I was required to write a letter to invite my friends to my city. I have some specific queries about it, but I've put the whole thing for some context. The problem phrases are in bold.
Dear Sussane, David & Joshua
I am excited to receive you all on Sunday next week at Hyderabad Airport Central. Therefore, there isn't any need to worry about logistics from airport to my home.
Let me share the vacation plan that you would think of spending here. This city has an history of Nizam Royal Family, whose heritage is left behind 400 years ago. Some of the obvious destinations that has to be visited are Charminar, Golconda Fort, Falaknuma Palace & Ramoji Film City.
Hyderabad hosts a Zoological park. Therefore, You could think of coming with children for this trip. Children can have some learning experience at Salarjung museum. > For a comfortable trip this would not consume more than 4 days. Therefore, Please plan accordingly and make me informed before starting from there.
1) Can i address the recipients with multiple names, when i write a letter? by saying
Dear A, B & C
2) Could i use a better phrase than saying left behind?
3) Can the heritage destinations be mentioned with Initial Capitalise letter? for example:
4) Can i better the wind-up statement at the end of the letter? Looks like I did not phrase it concisely
before starting from there.