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Consider the two below sentences, which are identical to each other in every respect but this: the first sentence contains 'and', the second 'or'.

The enemy was not shaken off and long outdistanced.

The enemy was not shaken off or long outdistanced.

What is the difference in meaning between these two sentences?

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I might be completely off, but I parse them as follows:

The enemy was (not shaken off) and (long outdistanced).
("not" is only connected to "shaken off")

The enemy was (not (shaken off or long outdistanced)).
("not" connects both "shaken off" and "long outdistanced")

in which case the first sentence doesn't make much sense. You can't outdistance someone without shaking them off first.

I think the second sentence could be rewritten to

The enemy was neither shaken off nor long outdistanced.

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  • Thank you for your response. Do you know why it is that, if 'not' is used to negate a clause coordinated by 'and', the interpretation of the coordinated clause is that only one of its coordinates is negated? I.e., do you know why the use of 'and' yields the first interpretation, and the use of 'or' the second? (Apologies for the poor wording of my question.)
    – Eric
    Feb 5, 2022 at 10:46
  • This is fantasy ("sub-sub-sub- to the power of N -Tolkiein") fan-fiction of the worst kind, written by an amateur for a "wiki". . It shows all the failings of the genre. Overblown "olde-fashioned" language, shaky grammar, probably not even by a native speaker. Not very good material to learn English from. Feb 5, 2022 at 13:35
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The exact context is from the fictional account THÉODRED RETREATS TO THE FORDS IN THE 1ST BATTLE OF THE FORDS OF ISEN (bold text by me):

It had been a dim ... morning, but the mists were now rolling back through the Gap ... and away east of the river [Théodred] descried other forces now hasting towards the Fords, though their strength could not be guessed. He at once ordered a retreat. This the Riders, well trained in the manoeuvre, managed in good order and with little further loss; but the enemy was not shaken off or long outdistanced, for the retreat was often delayed, when the rearguard under Grimbold was obliged to turn at bay and drive back the most eager of then-pursuers.

So the target text is interpreted as:

the enemy was not shaken off and the enemy was not long outdistanced

or

the enemy was neither shaken off nor long outdistanced

Now let's consider the "and" form, but let's also ignore the original context for a moment.

the enemy was not shaken off and long outdistanced

This has a literal interpretation as follows:

the enemy was not shaken off and the enemy was long outdistanced

In what context could that be true? What if the enemy was, in fact, outdistanced, but still not totally shaken off? This might occur if, for example, there was only one path to take out of a mountainous region, and you were making significant headway ahead of your enemy (thus "outdistancing them"), but they were still not "shaken off" because they were still aggressively pursuing you on the same path behind you. Since the two true facts are in opposition with each other, it would be better to join them with "but":

the enemy was not shaken off but was long outdistanced

Or even better:

the enemy was long outdistanced but not shaken off

Or with an emphasis adverb ("totally"):

the enemy was long outdistanced but not totally shaken off [because they were still aggressively in pursuit]

On the other hand, depending on context, one might suspect that your originally proposed "and" form might be poorly worded or semantically incorrect.

Finally, consider another scenario. What if the enemy took a wrong turn? Then we might have:

the enemy was shaken off [because they took a wrong turn] but not long outdistanced [because it was only recent that they did that, and if they turned around they might catch us]

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