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The short PARs of platypus chromosomes X2–X5 have a significantly higher GC content (one-sided Wilcoxon rank-sum test, P < 0.01) than the SDRs or the longer PARs (Extended Data Fig. 4c) (,) which probably reflects strong GC-biased gene conversion that is caused by a high recombination rate.

Is the comma needed in this sentence?

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  • The rather long and unwieldy sentence could be improved by splitting and starting the second sentence This probably reflects.
    – mdewey
    Apr 30, 2022 at 15:47
  • Where did you find this sentence? Or did you make it up?
    – BillJ
    Apr 30, 2022 at 16:01
  • You can leave out: that is. Also, this is editing, which we don't do around here. :)
    – Lambie
    Jul 26 at 13:57

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The short PARs of platypus chromosomes X2–X5 have a significantly higher GC content (one-sided Wilcoxon rank-sum test, P < 0.01) than the SDRs or the longer PARs (Extended Data Fig. 4c), [which probably reflects strong GC-biased gene conversion that is caused by a high recombination rate].

So I take it that you're asking if the bracketed relative clause should be a defining one or a non-defining one.

Despite the highly technical nature of the sentence, I'd say it's non-defining, since it appears to refer to the whole of the clause that precedes it, as opposed to one of the preceding noun phrases.

Note that non-defining relatives are not modifiers, but supplements, i.e. additional non-integrated content set apart by punctuation and a slight pause in speech.

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