I'm told that this sentence is confusing and hard to understand.
A little further the road skirted a small lake — a lonely sight for the glance, cast out of the window in the evening.
What I mean:
- There was a road near the lake.
- If you look through the window, like when you are bored, not trying to see something specific there (a.k.a cast a glance, I know no better option), you can see the lake there.
- This lake is the only interesting thing you can see (lonely sight) - there is nothing else but wilderness.
- And at the same time it gives you some pleasure/you like it (optional).
As I understand it, there are two problems:
- sight for the glance
- glance, cast out of the window
Please mention what else is confusing in the original sentence, if any.
I thought about it a lot and used some dictionaries, but they can't provide me with phrases and language constructions enough.
I want to start with the road and keep most of the original sense. How can I rewrite it to be clear and understandable? Feel free to provide an example.