Sentence:
I returned my laptop to same courier, which I received from them few months back, so they picked the laptop from me on Oct 10 2022.
I have trouble phrasing this sentence because of this clause "which I received from them"
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I returned my laptop to same courier, which I received from them few months back, so they picked the laptop from me on Oct 10 2022.
I have trouble phrasing this sentence because of this clause "which I received from them"
I returned my laptop to same courier, which I received from them few months back, so they picked the laptop from me on Oct 10 2022.
If I am getting you correctly, you need to restructure your sentence a little and use new/proper verbs and add a few details.
I initiated the return of my laptop "on" (insert the date of initiation of the return procedure), the same courier that delivered the laptop to me picked up the laptop from me on Oct 10, 2022.
e.g. I initiated the return of my laptop on Xxx XX, XXXX; the same courier that delivered the laptop to me, picked up the laptop from me on Oct 10, 2022.
Or the shorter version
I initiated the return of my laptop on Xxx XX, XXXX; the same courier that delivered the laptop, picked it up on Oct 10, 2022.
If you want to use "received" rather than "delivered", the sentence would look like
I initiated the return of my laptop on Xxx XX, XXXX; the same courier that I received the laptop from, picked it up on Oct 10, 2022.
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