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Are the sentences grammatically correct?

He hadn't been cleaning Suzi's room while she was ill.

He wasn't cleaning Suzi's room while she was ill.

PS: I think I should have added a request for context. Could you come up with contexts in which they can be used?

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  • Is Suzi "her"? It would be clearer if you put Suzi first and the pronoun second.
    – gotube
    Nov 13, 2022 at 5:10
  • actually "the he" is her husband
    – user1425
    Nov 13, 2022 at 5:23
  • I'm asking about "her". Is that Suzi? Does this have the same meaning: "He hadn't been cleaning Suzi's room while she was ill"?
    – gotube
    Nov 13, 2022 at 5:55
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    It isn't a minor point; 'her' could be someone whose room Suzi normally cleaned, and 'he' hadn't been standing in for Suzi while she was unable to do it. Nov 13, 2022 at 9:06
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    @user1425 Because having unnatural structure in sentences makes it difficult to assess the naturalness of the whole sentence, even parts you're not asking about.
    – gotube
    Nov 13, 2022 at 20:58

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As I know they are because with when while (that already emphasize simultaneous reference) you can ignore sequence of tenses

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  • Your sentence isn't at all clear, Petro. Nov 13, 2022 at 9:07

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