- She doesn't like it if I tell other people about it.
This is a sentence I am writing. This version above sounds the best to my ear.
- She doesn't like if I tell other people about it.
Without the "it" this sentence doesn't seem to work, does it?
- She doesn't like it that I tell other people about it.
- She doesn't like that I tell other people about it.
- She doesn't like I tell other people about it.
The meaning changes with these variations to carry the connotation that "I tell other people about it" is a fact, right? Do they work syntactically? And idiomatically?
- She doesn't like it when I tell other people about it.
- She doesn't like when I tell other people about it.
The meaning seems to change a little with this version too, but it sounds fine to me. So which ones are grammatical? And as an English sentence construction question, more generally what kinds of clauses can I use in situations like this?