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While reading Practical English Usage by Michael Swan, I found (p. 270, inversion section) that:
In spoken American English, exclamations often have the same form as ordinary (non-negative) questions (but with different intonation).
Have you got a surprise coming!
Is it valid if, instead, I make an exclamation with this following style?
Do you have a surprise coming!
Or are there certain ‘question-styled’ exclamations that are considered as legitimate while others just don't? What do you think?
It's OK! It's often used with an exclamatory word in front as a signal: "Wow, do you have a surprise coming!", or with an intensifier like "really":
"Have you finished your dinner?"
"Wow, you really have finished your dinner!"
Of course, you can't do this with every question. ("What is the square root of sixty-four?") It works with many or most simple "yes or no" questions with stative verbs, however.
Any form of "yes/no" question that I can think of can be used as an exclamation. In writing, the intent is much clearer with exclamation words, and "ever" added in:
Wow, do you ever have a surprise coming! (present simple)
Man, had my staff ever been busy! (past perfect)
Holy cow, would I have ever been in trouble if my boss had walked in! (unreal past conditional)
Holy smokes, was the work ever done badly! (passive voice)
With content questions/"wh"-questions (that's to say, not "yes/no" questions), you can use them as rhetorical questions, which may be understood as exclamations, but they're still questions, not exclamations, and so must be written in question format:
Wow, how much have you grown?
Boy, what does he eat for breakfast?
The simple answer is yes. But. Your new version can also be a question, so you haven't really addressed your issue. Consider that "Do you have a package coming?" is a perfectly normal question.
You should also be aware that, depending on situation, some questions are emphatic declarations, but not of the question being asked. For instance, "Did your mother have any children who lived?" does not expect an answer, it's just an insult. Tone of voice matters in common conversation.
