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  1. (KCRA news) More than a decade before she would become the Democratic presidential nominee, Harris was making a run for statewide office in California in a close contest.
  2. (FORTUNE news) Mike Lynch was ‘Britain’s Bill Gates’—but the late tech millionaire would spend many of his final months under house arrest
  3. (https://www.pbs.org/wgbh/commandingheights/shared/minitext/prof_dengxiaoping.html#top) Wealthy Nationalists were financing the training of young revolutionaries in Moscow who would restore China's dignity. Among Deng's fellow students was Chiang Ching-kno, son of the Nationalist Party leader Chiang Kai-shek. Much later, in the 1980s, the younger Chiang would succeed his father as president of Taiwan... It was at this time that Deng, not known for his aphorisms, made his most famous statement: "It doesn't matter whether a cat is black or white so long as it catches mice." Although he himself would later say he was not sure exactly what he had meant, it was very clearly an affirmation of pragmatism in economic policy in the aftermath of the fanaticism of the Great Leap. It was also a phrase that would find resonance around the world.

My Questions: I have come across this structure many times when reading a famous person’s past history but I still don’t understand why WOULD is used instead of LATER + simple past.

Are the following correct (later + simple past )? What's the difference?

  1. More than a decade before she became the Democratic presidential nominee…
  2. … but the late tech millionaire later spent many of his final months under house arrest

… the younger Chiang later succeeded his father as president of Taiwan… … Although he himself later said he was not sure exactly what he had meant... …It was also a phrase that later found resonance around the world.

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  • Disclaimer: I'm not a native speaker. But I feel the narration flows in a different way using "would" instead of "later + simple past". When using "would", from the narration flow's point of view, you're not "advancing in time" to the point where the thing actually happens, you're just tangentially mentioning it for completeness, and you're still at the same point in time. While when using "later + simple past" you're, even if briefly, actually advancing to the point where the thing actually happens. It might be just my interpretation, and I may have explained it poorly, but there you have it
    – kos
    Commented Aug 27 at 20:43

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In most of these, it doesn’t matter, but in some it does

Each of these is talking about three events:

  • An origin event - “making a run”, “[being] ‘Britain’s Bill Gates’”, “financing the training”, etc.
  • An intermediate event - “[becoming] the Democratic presidential nominee”, “under house arrest”, “[restoring] Chin’s dignity”, etc.
  • Now

Where the context anchors these events - “More than a decade before” and “[becoming] the Democratic presidential nominee” are fixed points in time - the simple past works just as well.

However, where the context leaves the events ‘floating’, there is a risk that the intermediate event could be conflated with either the originating event of now. Using “would” makes it clear that these are three seperate events.

So, for the second example, using “would” makes it clear that he was not under house arrest at the time of his death. If we used “spent”, it’s reasonable to conclude that he died in house arrest. Because, “house arrest” Is a continuing period of time, rather than an instant in time.

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  • +1 for a generally good answer. But I question your interpretation of the 2nd example. Spent his final months and would spend his final months mean the same. It's the addition of many that allows us to draw the additional conclusion. Commented Aug 28 at 4:57
  • The Mike Lynch example isn't very good writing. Did he stop being Britain's answer to Bill Gates when he was arrested? I'm not sure that makes sense. People were still calling him Britain’s answer to Bill Gates after his death. I think this use of "would" is a journalistic cliche that is overused and doesn't always make a lot of sense. Journalists use it to create a dramatic "before and after" scenario (either a fall from grace or a dramatic rise), but often the real world doesn't work like that and there isn't a dramatic contrast before and after.
    – Stuart F
    Commented Aug 29 at 16:40
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Consider:

As a teen, he wanted to be a jet pilot and he did succeed in that ambition, but he would go on to become an astronaut.

At the time of his being a jet pilot, astronaut was still in his future. would can be used with future-in-past scenarios.

As a teen, he wanted to be a jet pilot and he did succeed in that ambition, but he went on to become an astronaut.

went on refers to the same historical events but from the perspective of looking back at them, whereas would go on establishes a perspective of looking forward from some point in time in the past.

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