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Here are my constructions:

  1. I should like to know whether it is possible to purchase this workshop manual.
  2. I should like to know whether it is possible to buy this workshop manual.

So my question is, should I use 'purchase' or 'buy'?

Also, am I missing any articles in this letter?

Full context:

Dear Sir or Madam,
I have a question concerning workshop manuals for Pontiac. Manual for this car model was previously only available on the website at: [...]. On the website was information that manual provides overview of [engine model] engine.

I should like to know whether it is possible to purchase this workshop manual.

Thank you for your time and I am looking forward to your answer.

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  • Is there a reason that one seems better than the other to you?
    – user6951
    Commented Feb 26, 2015 at 14:37
  • Give us a bit more context. It's nigh on impossible to tell you which is better. Rule of thumb: "purchase" is a bit more formal than "buy".
    – JMB
    Commented Feb 26, 2015 at 14:37
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    Related, from English.SE: Is “purchased” more formal than “bought?”
    – apsillers
    Commented Feb 26, 2015 at 14:39
  • In another matter, I would like to know is much more common and less stuffy, at least in American English.
    – user6951
    Commented Feb 26, 2015 at 14:39
  • That sounds like a good match for purchase. Also we don't do general proofreading on this site, but you need an article before a singular count noun, ie your first two uses of 'manual'. I suggest the. And your use of 'overview', for which I suggest an. Note you have a before 'question' which is correct.
    – user6951
    Commented Feb 26, 2015 at 14:49

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"Purchase" and "buy" mean the same thing. Either sentence is fine. "Purchase" is a little more formal.

BTW In the full text you gave, you're missing some articles it should be:

Dear Sir or Madam, I have a question concerning workshop manuals for Pontiac. THE manual for this car model was previously only available on the website at: [...]. On the website was information that THE manual provides AN overview of THE [engine model] engine.

I should like to know whether it is possible to purchase this workshop manual.

Thank you for your time and I am looking forward to your answer.

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