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Am I correct to include a comma before "but instead" in the following example? I am not sure if the latter part of the sentence could be considered a main clause because there is no subject, so I am not sure if I am right or not.

The manual holds that women must not choose a programme themselves, but instead wait to be assigned to a module.

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  • The comma works for me. I suspect the comma is optional; it is not strictly necessary since there is only one subject in the clause, but without the comma I find the sentence harder to parse and somewhat less clear.
    – phoog
    Jun 2 '15 at 9:15
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    Wow... that's a lovely rule... ugh. Do men get to choose their own programme?
    – Catija
    Jun 2 '15 at 17:27
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The manual holds that women mustn't choose a programme themselves, but instead wait to be assigned to a module.

You use a comma before "but" if it introduces an independent complete clause.

As there's no independent clause after "but" in the sentence presented above, it doesn't need a comma before "but".

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The manual holds that women must not choose a programme themselves, but instead wait to be assigned to a module.

Comma usage varies among writers. Unless you are supposed to be writing according to the dictates of a certain style guide, then you should include a comma only if greatly helps the reader. I don't think it greatly helps the reader here and so it can be omitted.

People generally overuse commas, so it's always a good exercise to read through what one has written and eliminate any unnecessary ones.

Consider:

When I write or teach I am also very much against the overuse of commas.

Which is one reason I wrote the preceding sentence with no comma, although by "rules of comma usage" one or two could have been included and not considered a grammatical error.

One place they usually do not help the reader is when they come between a subject and a verb, as in

The local sheriff, rounded up the bad guys.

It is useful, however, to use one here:

The local sheriff, whose name was Clint, rounded up the bad guys.

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