I have a question about some sentence structure:
- The finished product deviated from the original design.
Sentence 1 seems a little off, because it directly compares a product to a design. Would the following rewrite:
- The design of the finished product deviated from the original design.
be better, because the design of the final product is directly compared to the original design? It is better to compare one apple with another apple, instead of comparing an apple with an orange.