Here are sentences that I want to trasform using participle phrases.
Rain was pouring down. We were standing next to each other at a bar and seeing rain droping through the window without saying anything, because we ran out of things to talk about.
Rain pouring, standing next to each other at a bar, we were seeing rain dropping without saying anything, runing out of things to talk about.
Am I right to do this? If so, what's the diffetence in nuance?