I am writing a covering letter for an internship, but I am having a hard time on a sentence. It seems to me that something is wrong, but I can't figure what it is.
I have changed 1 or 2 things, for privacy purpose. Please, act like it was the original version!
I have seen on your website that your activities go from bread testing to wireless cake. I am keen to work in such fields later.
This seems very odd to me. The last sentence is both too short and too... disharmonious?
What I want to say is that I want to "test bread" and work in "wireless cake" when my studies will be over. That could even be at the end of the internship if everything went well.
Could you propose me a better way to say this?