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Please help me with the following sentence improvement question.

"If he smokes less he might get rid of his cough".

My book gave the below options to choose one from:

  1. If he smoked less he would get rid of his cough
  2. If he had smoked less he might get rid of his cough
  3. If he smokes less he might have got rid of his cough
  4. no improvement

My text book gave '1' as the answer but I think it's '4'. What you suggest?

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    Hi Abhi, it would be helpful if you'd explain why you think the answer is 4. – shin Sep 26 '15 at 19:51
  • But 1 is definitely wrong as it does not mean the same thing. – peterG Sep 26 '15 at 20:43
  • Hi Shin, I thought the first option is in past tense while the original sentence is talking about a possible solution at the moment. Hence its not a improvement of the given sentence but a complete change in the tone altogether. Kindly Correct me If I am wrong. – Abhi Sep 27 '15 at 3:01
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You are right, and your book is wrong: not just a little bit wrong, or wrong under certain limited circumstances, but entirely wrong.

The sentence, as written, has an unambiguous meaning:

It is possible that he will get rid of his cough if he smokes less in the future.

The words in which this is expressed are unimpeachably correct in any register—this is not a ‘formal’ vs ‘colloquial’ issue, or anything of that sort. It does not require any ‘improvement’.

The sentence proposed as an ‘improvement’ is no such thing: it is exactly as grammatical, no more, no less, but it presents a different meaning:

It is certain that he would get rid of his cough if he smoked less now or in the future.

Unhappily, textbooks often present deplorable exercises like this. The authors are typically very narrowly focused on the particular grammatical “rule” they are currently teaching; to test your understanding they invent sentences which seem to violate that rule, and they fail to realize that their sentences have a meaning beyond the context in which they invented them, and that the “violations” are in fact compliant under different rules.

You are to be congratulated on spotting this error. Don’t hold it against the author: the folks who write these textbooks are mostly overworked, underpaid teachers who haven’t got time to exercise critical imagination, proofread and rewrite three or four or a dozen times.


I'm going to bet that this exercise follows either a section of the book on 'first/second/third conditionals' or a section of the book introducing the use of the modal verbs can/could, may/might, must, shall/should and will/would.

  • Many thanks for the response. Your answer was in line with the way I was thinking. And FYI, this exercise is not a follow-up of any section as such. it's just a part of many set of questions that are given for practicing; I am preparing for a competitive exam. – Abhi Sep 27 '15 at 3:20

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