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I write user guide on English (foreign language to me).

Web Application have form on separate page for new user registration. I need to build sentence to say about this, but can't find right words.

I need something like this:

Creating Gmail email take place on register form.

But it sounds badly.

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    We'll probably need a better idea of the context you need to use this phrase in. Is this the text of a link (or text that includes a link), a mention in a Frequently Asked Questions page, or what? Oct 23, 2015 at 19:58
  • It is unclear what you are asking, but you can say: Creating a Gmail account redirects you to the registration page/form.
    – Usernew
    Oct 24, 2015 at 16:42
  • I agree with the others about clarity, but my best guess at what you're after would be something like: A Gmail address will be generated for you after completing the registration form. Honestly though, Stack Exchange may not be the best site for answering your questions. Oct 24, 2015 at 18:23
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    You are not fluent in English and should get someone fluent in English to help you write the guide, because every single sentence of yours is bad English. "I am writing a user guide in English ... A web application has a form on a separate page for new user registration. I want to build ("construct" is better) a sentence to say/convey this, but can't find the right words. ... But it sounds bad" And it is.
    – user21820
    Nov 29, 2015 at 12:28

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Create the Gmail account on the registration page... The Gmail account will be created on the registration page... Use the registration form to create the Gmail account...

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    Please edit to include an explanation of why these would be correct; answers without explanation do not teach the patterns of the language well. Dec 2, 2015 at 23:18

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