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The celebrities that organized the marathon were aiming to create an awareness about the treatment of diabetes.

The celebrities that organized the marathon were aiming at creating an awareness about the treatment of diabetes.

Are these two sentence grammatical correct, and if they are correct, what is the difference in there meaning

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'to create' is the infinitive form of the verb, and 'aiming to create' is certainly correct.

I would say 'aiming at creating' is also correct, but using 'to create' sounds more educated.

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Both sentences are understandable, meaning the celebrities are trying to increase awareness about diabetes.

One aims to do something, and one aims at an objective

Your first sentence might be better as

...were aiming to create awareness... ( where there was none before )
...were aiming to increase awareness... ( to a greater level )

Your second sentence is a bit verbose in construction, possibly better might be

The celebrities that organized the marathon were aiming at increasing awareness about diabetes treatment.

Using

creating an awareness

implies there are several different kinds or types of awareness, whereas with awareness there is usually differing levels of understanding.

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