I wrote a sentence that was considered awkward by fellow translators, on a couple of counts. I'm singling out one particular construction they found awkward:
During the tour, you will hear interesting stories about the city, learning about memorable events that were taking place here.
Would a native speaker find this construction awkward? Would it be better to use "that have taken place" or "that took place", or maybe to remodel the whole sentence to avoid using any of the options?
My another question about the same sentence concerns the use of "learning".