My English teacher, who is a native, told us to write an essay about Fate. She made a correction on one of the paragraphs of my essay, and I wanted to make sure if it was valid. This is the paragraph:
Am I to have an accident tomorrow, or maybe, meet someone who'll change my life a year from now? Will Fate determine who will I be in my future? What will I do? Where will I end up? Are the decisions I made lately entirely mine?
My teacher corrected the inversions that are in italics, pointing out that I should have used I will instead of Will I. Is this correct?