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Better title, formatting; fixed typo; added tag
Nathan Tuggy
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Can I rewrite this as "… students angry have walked out"?

Students angry that former TV Apprentice contestant Katie Hopkins was speaking at a Brunel University debate have walked out in protest.

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Is it possible to rewrite the above sentence in this way:

In protest that former TV Apprentice Katie Hopkins was speaking at a Brunel University debate, students angry have walked out.

If so, which one does sound to a native speaker better in terms of wording?

bart-leby
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