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Mark Hubbard
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This is a rather convoluted sentence (you can read the entire article here), but I think it breaks down like this:

  • The obvious paradox which makes [the thesis] ... actually serve idealism ...
  • the thesis of man’s animal origin
  • the thesis thus understood
  • [the paradox] has already been pointed out by A. Leroi-Gourhan.

So the part you've picked out is qualifying the thesis - it is not just any thesis of man's animal origins, it is the particular thesis that is understood because of something in a preceding sentence.

A more direct phrasing might be something like this:

An obvious paradox in this thesis of man's animal origins makes it actually serve idealism, as already pointed out by A. Leroi-Gourhan.

This is a rather convoluted sentence, but I think it breaks down like this:

  • The obvious paradox which makes [the thesis] ... actually serve idealism ...
  • the thesis of man’s animal origin
  • the thesis thus understood
  • [the paradox] has already been pointed out by A. Leroi-Gourhan.

So the part you've picked out is qualifying the thesis - it is not just any thesis of man's animal origins, it is the particular thesis that is understood because of something in a preceding sentence.

A more direct phrasing might be something like this:

An obvious paradox in this thesis of man's animal origins makes it actually serve idealism, as already pointed out by A. Leroi-Gourhan.

This is a rather convoluted sentence (you can read the entire article here), but I think it breaks down like this:

  • The obvious paradox which makes [the thesis] ... actually serve idealism ...
  • the thesis of man’s animal origin
  • the thesis thus understood
  • [the paradox] has already been pointed out by A. Leroi-Gourhan.

So the part you've picked out is qualifying the thesis - it is not just any thesis of man's animal origins, it is the particular thesis that is understood because of something in a preceding sentence.

A more direct phrasing might be something like this:

An obvious paradox in this thesis of man's animal origins makes it actually serve idealism, as already pointed out by A. Leroi-Gourhan.

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IMSoP
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This is a rather convoluted sentence, but I think it breaks down like this:

  • The obvious paradox which makes [the thesis] ... actually serve idealism ...
  • the thesis of man’s animal origin
  • the thesis thus understood
  • [the paradox] has already been pointed out by A. Leroi-Gourhan.

So the part you've picked out is qualifying the thesis - it is not just any thesis of man's animal origins, it is the particular thesis that is understood because of something in a preceding sentence.

A more direct phrasing might be something like this:

An obvious paradox in this thesis of man's animal origins makes it actually serve idealism, as already pointed out by A. Leroi-Gourhan.