I am going to say something in English but i don't know what are the best words or grammatical method for expression of it  ?

This is the concept :

"Soul is the point at the center of art circle" or "Soul is the central point of art circle"

Do you have any idea for replacing of some of words in that sentence by better synonyms  !

I need your technical offers ?

I am going to say something in English but I don't know what are the best words or grammatical method for expression of it?

This is the concept :

"Soul is the point at the center of art circle" or "Soul is the central point of art circle"

Do you have any idea for replacing of some of words in that sentence by better synonyms!

I need your technical offers.