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This is from "The Call of Cthulhu" by H.P. Lovecraft:

The most merciful thing in the world, I think, is the inability of the human mind to correlate all its contents. We live on a placid island of ignorance in the midst of black seas of infinity, and it was not meant that we should voyage far. The sciences, each straining in its own direction, have hitherto harmed us little; but some day the piecing together of dissociated knowledge will open up such terrifying vistas of reality, and of our frightful position therein, that we shall either go mad from the revelation or flee from the light into the peace and safety of a new dark age.

It seems that "and of our frightful position therein" stands for "and terrifying vistas of our frightful position therein", However, it seems a bit improper, because we're basically saying "but some day the piecing together of dissociated knowledge will open up such terrifying vistas of reality and will open up such terrifying vistas of our frightful position therein.", which is extremely redundant, and perhaps ungrammatical. Is this the case? What do you think about this?

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    With all due respect, if you wish to retain any sanity points at the end of this game, put down the H.P. Lovecraft and walk away quickly. I think your attempted restructuring of this text is a sign you've already lost your first sanity point. That said, I'm already at negative san, so I'll make my own attempt.
    – Ed Grimm
    Commented Feb 14, 2019 at 1:39
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    I think it's more like but some day, the piecing together of disassociated knowledge will open up such terrifying vistas of reality, in which our positions will clearly be frightful, such that we shall either go mad from the revelation or flee from the light into the peace and safety of a new dark age.
    – Ed Grimm
    Commented Feb 14, 2019 at 1:40
  • +1 just for mentioning Lovecraft. Commented Feb 14, 2019 at 19:40

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The grammar is OK, and it doesn't seem redundant to me.

In the bolded phrase, "therein" refers to "reality", the noun right before the beginning of that phrase. So the phrase actually means, "and of our frightful position in reality". And the whole sentence has the meaning:

"... but some day the piecing together of dissociated knowledge will open up such terrifying vistas of reality, and of our frightful position in reality, ..."

The terrifying vistas are of two different things, of "reality" and of "our position (in it)."

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  • Oh, ok, it would make more sense if the vistas aren't overlapping.
    – user88427
    Commented Feb 14, 2019 at 1:51

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