That's because my grandfather was a traditional Balinese building architect all the buildings in my house were designed by him.
Can anyone answer what wrong with word architect? What wrong with grammar?
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3You tell us what you think is wrong with it.– BillJCommented Dec 24, 2020 at 8:36
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1Nothing that a bit of punctuation wouldn't fix.– AstralbeeCommented Dec 24, 2020 at 8:40
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1Nothing is wrong with the word architect, but it's unnecessary to add building because an architect is by definition a designer of buildings..– Kate BuntingCommented Dec 24, 2020 at 8:59
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1Should "all the buildings in my house" be "all the buildings on my property"?– Weather VaneCommented Dec 24, 2020 at 9:02
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That's because my grandfather was a traditional Balinese building architect all the buildings in my house were designed by him.
What's wrong with it:
- Is the word 'building' connected to the word 'Balinese' or the word 'architect'? Are you saying your grandfather was a 'building architect' or an architect of 'Balinese buildings'?
- What is 'traditional' related to? Was your grandfather a traditional architect, or did he design traditional buildings?
- You appear to have two clauses but no punctuation.
- You appear to have buildings inside your house?
I think it should be:
That's because my grandfather was a traditional Balinese architect. All the buildings around my house were designed by him.
answered Dec 24, 2020 at 12:46
