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I have difficulty understanding what a word in the end of a sentence refers to.

Firms can gain a better understanding of their purchased supplies and their journey.

Does 'their journey' in this sentence refer to the purchased supplies (as intended) or to firms? How should it be rewritten if it is incorrect?

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  • It's unclear without more context. What is the subject of the article? Commented Oct 12, 2021 at 16:31

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Your quotation is a good example of ambiguity. There is nothing wrong with the sentence, it just isn't clear from the grammatical structure what the second 'their' refers back to. Careful writers try to avoid ambiguity, but we often just have to use context and logic to determine what is meant.

My old English teacher's favourite example of ambiguity was "my father drives to work in a hat". It could be read that the hat is his vehicle, but obviously, that is absurd and so it cannot mean that. That is an example of using logic to dispel ambiguity.

With your example, it seems unlikely that it refers to a 'journey' made by "the firms". It immediately felt obvious to me that it was talking about the 'journey' made by the goods they order. Perhaps the wider context confirms that - for example, if it was from an article about 'carbon footprints' made by businesses, it would seem logical that the distance goods travel would be under consideration.

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    My sister hates her aunt and her dog. Commented Oct 12, 2021 at 17:05
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    @MichaelHarvey That is a tough one without any context. If you knew that the sister didn't have a dog it would be clear.
    – Astralbee
    Commented Oct 12, 2021 at 17:22
  • If I said that, and you don't know whether my sister has a dog the natural response is something like "Whose is the dog?". Commented Oct 12, 2021 at 20:38
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Sometimes you can tell what a pronoun refers to by the number and/or sex.

Example 1: "Bob and Sally drove to the market in his car." "His" here must refer to Bob and not Sally because "his" is masculine, Bob is masculine, and Sally is feminine. So "his" matches the gender of Bob but not of Sally. (One could quibble that I am assuming that "Bob" is a man and "Sally" is a woman. It is, of course, possible that Sally is a man. But not very likely, and unless in context we are told that Sally is a man, readers would normally assume that she is a woman.)

Example 2: "The people in the crowd booed when the actor gave his speech. Then they threw rocks." In the second sentence, "they" must refer to "the people in the crowd" because it is plural and "the people" is plural. It can't be the actor who threw rocks because "they" is plural but "actor" is singular.

Besides that, you have to rely on logic and context. Like suppose I read, "Bob and the dog entered the house. 'Hello', he said." I'd normally assume that "he said" refers to Bob and not the dog, because dogs can't talk. (If this sentence occurred in a story about a talking dog, then it would be unclear.)

People sometimes -- often -- say or write sentences that are unclear because such references are ambiguous. When the person is saying the sentence, he knows that when he says "he" he means the tall man with the red hat (or whomever), but he fails to make that clear to the listener.

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  • Given the current frequent use of "singular they" your logic in example 2 is less than solid. However, booing and throwing rocks are both indications of disapproval, which also suggests that 'the crowd" did both But in "The actor made a speech. Then they left the stage" it seems clear that 'they" refers back to "the actor" Commented Oct 12, 2021 at 18:49
  • @DavidSiegel If I read, "The crowd booed the actor. Then he threw rocks at them", I would understand that to mean that the actor throw rocks at the crowd, not the other way around.
    – Jay
    Commented Oct 13, 2021 at 14:54
  • Yes, the use of "singular they" creates the ambiguity that "they" can be plural or singular. We've had that problem with "you" for a long time. Some people have tried to solve it by creating "y'all" and "yous" as plural forms, but now we're going backwards and creating a new ambiguity. That's an argument against the use of a singular they.
    – Jay
    Commented Oct 13, 2021 at 14:57
  • "y'all" and "all y'all" are at least 150 years old in US Southern dialect. I haven't checked, bur I suspect "yous"is also a well-established dialect form. I personally dislike singular they and avoid using it, but it has been in at least occasional use by respected writers for several hundred years. Yes it does create ambiguity in some cases, but then English has so many other ways to be ambiguous that one more hardly matters much. Commented Oct 13, 2021 at 17:47

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