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Writing is very much a processing of recording ideas for yourself in notes and then of preparing to share those ideas with others in some written form.

This sentence is cited from a guide book by Oxford.

I always omit the preposition "of" after the first one when I am listing multiple things. Is it wrong, or it is okay to omit it?

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“And” can be used to make lists of anything, so long as they are parallel.

Writing is very much a process* of recording ideas, of preparing to share those ideas, and of following through.

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Writing is very much a process of recording ideas, preparing to share those ideas, and following through.

A list of prepositional phrases is probably less conventional than a prepositional phrase where the object is a list, and so tends to set off each item. That can be rhetorically useful if you are trying to say “this important thing and this other, also-important thing, plus this third very important thing” — as opposed to “this big undifferentiated collection of things”.

Compare the different stress here:

Writing is very much a process of recording ideas, a process of preparing to share those ideas, and a process of following through.

This emphasizes the multifaceted nature of writing, rather than framing it as a neat series of steps.

* “Processing” in your original quote is a typo. It should be “process”.

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