Is the order of adjectives correct in the following sentence?
Also, is the usage of "yet" correct?
"He was a slim yet athletic bronzed man."
What about this one?
"I gasped as I saw his legs torn with ugly wide wounds that bore the signs of shark bites."
And this one:
"A man on the deck, was shouting, flapping his hands and pointing to the below, the deep dark blue waters." "The invader was a ten foot shark."