When you start a sentence sequence, for example with "he", would It be correct if I construct the sentences as following:
He started walking down the road. Took a sigh. Was amazed with the beauty of the sky.
I know that I could construct the sentences like below, if I am not wrong:
He started walking down the road, took a sigh, was amazed with the beauty of the sky.
But I don't want to use lots of commas. In my opinion even if the way I build the sentence is wrong, people wouldn't find it absurd, am I right?
Please don't give me alternatives of the sentences. I just want to know about the exact example I gave.