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IHTIMAM is a process that creates a safety partnership between the workforce and management that continually focuses everyone's attention and actions on their own and others daily safety behavior.

My question is that there are two bold thats above and the first one define to process but I am confused about the second one which is after the management above define to what? Please clarify.

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  • This is a clumsy sentence, but it probably refers to "partnership". Apr 28, 2021 at 9:28
  • IHTIMAM is a process that creates [a partnership that focuses everyone's attention on safety behavior].
    – ColleenV
    Apr 28, 2021 at 12:06

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There seems to be a mistake in the use of the objective pronoun others when the possessive pronoun others' should be used instead.

IHTIMAM is a process that creates a safety partnership between the workforce and management that continually focuses everyone's attention and actions on their own and [others'] daily safety behavior.

The first that-clause is a restrictive relative clause modifying process; the second, modifying partnership.

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