I am writing the first paragraph(introduction) of an essay. I want to write my thesis statement as follows:
I believe that preserving historical places has greater advantages than constructing new buildings because historical buildings teach people about history that happened in the distant past, and as historical monuments attract tourists, preserving historical landmarks is helpful to stimulate the economy.
The problem is this sentence is too long, so I want to divide this sentence using semicolon(;). Which one is correct, 1 or 2? (the difference is whether "for the following reasons" exists or not)
I believe that preserving historical places has greater advantages than constructing new buildings for the following reasons; firstly, historical buildings teach people about history that happened in the distant past, and further more, as historical monuments attract tourists, preserving historical landmarks is helpful to stimulate the economy.
I believe that preserving historical places has greater advantages than constructing new buildings; firstly, historical buildings teach people about history that happened in the distant past, and further more, as historical monuments attract tourists, preserving historical landmarks is helpful to stimulate the economy.