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I am working on a statistical method. I would like to describe one main step of this method in one sentence. This step has a good and weak point.

Here is my try:

The free choice of the parameters is one of the main strength of the structure method, and it also forms one of the main challenge parts.

I feel that my sentence is very weak.

Any help, please?

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  • "one of the main strengths" (plural).
    – TimR
    Commented Jul 3, 2018 at 11:10
  • I don't understand what is meant by structure method.
    – TimR
    Commented Jul 3, 2018 at 11:11
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    Are you trying to say that being able to choose the parameters is one of the main advantages of the approach, but knowing which parameters to choose can be a challenge?
    – TimR
    Commented Jul 3, 2018 at 11:13
  • Read up on how to use the word although.
    – TimR
    Commented Jul 3, 2018 at 11:18
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    Maryam, in general you need to ask a more specific question than you have done here, since the rules of this site would treat your question as a request for proofreading. So I will leave it as a comment for now :) Welcome to ELL. There are many people here who are willing to help learners.
    – TimR
    Commented Jul 3, 2018 at 11:31

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All these sentences mean that the free choice of the parameters is the advantage of the structure method,but at the same time it forms one of the main challenges.I took the liberty to rephrase your sentence.

  • The free choice of the parameters is one of the main strengths of the structure method, but it is also one of the main challenges.
  • The free choice of the parameters is one of the main strengths of the structure method. However, it is also one of the main challenges.
  • The free choice of the parameters is one of the main strengths of the structure method, although it is also one of the main challenges.(you may even use though which is the short form of although)
  • The free choice of the parameters is one of the main strengths of the structure method, even though/if it is also one of the main challenges.
  • The free choice of the parameters is one of the main strengths of the structure method,despite the fact that it is also one of the main challenges.
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