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i am having following constructions

  1. my supervisor strongly recommend for an extension.
  2. I would like to apply for one year extension period.
  3. I have been granted a scholarship.

Would the following sentence be a way to write the previous sentence in a single sentence?

Therefore, with my supervisor's strong recommendation, I would like to apply for one year extension period for my scholarship that I have been granted.

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Why are you beginning your sentence with Therefore? I would just write the sentence thus:

Given my supervisor’s strong recommendation, I would like to apply for one year extension period for my scholarship.

It is not necessary to state that the scholarship has been granted - the word extension already indicates this.

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It is a little wordy

Therefore, with my supervisor’s strong recommendation, I would like to apply for a one year extension of my scholarship.

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