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The point is, I want to write a book about my life. Which one of this sentences that good in grammar and fit for my book?

What I have learned so far in my journey of life

What I have learned so far in journey of my life

And based on this question, should I use "in" or "on" ?

Thanks in advance.

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  • I suggest you hire someone to help you with your English as your question has a number of mistakes....
    – Lambie
    Commented Sep 9, 2020 at 16:57

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The second example is incorrect; you would need "the" before "journey."

Your question about "in" versus "on" is a stylistic one. I would suggest "on," because typically you go on a journey.

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  • So you prefer "What I have learned so far on the journey of my life" ?
    – Engkus Kusnadi
    Commented Jul 24, 2019 at 3:16

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