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The following sentence came to my mind once:

I smell the old-school summer smell every time I go there.

However, I'm not sure that it's idiomatic or not since the word "smell" is repeated twice.

Could you help to give me some advice on this?

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    You're using "old-school" in a weird way, BTW. old-school describes an attitude, or a style or manner, a way of doing things
    – TimR
    Commented Jul 15 at 10:27
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    Specifically: a "school" teaches way of doing things. Even an unofficial "school", like a style of music. So "old-school" could be understood as "the old way of doing things," and is not useful just to say in general that something is old or is remembered nostalgically.
    – Andy Bonner
    Commented Jul 15 at 16:47
  • @TimR, I found this definition on Merriam Webster for "old-school": characteristic or evocative of an earlier or original style, manner, or form. And along with an example: "old-school music".
    – Kt Student
    Commented Jul 16 at 2:56
  • @KtStudent Exactly my point. An earlier or original style, manner, or form. Your sentence says "old-school summer smell". A naturally occuring scent isn't "old-school" as it is not a "style" or "manner" or artistic "form". You're focusing on evocative and earlier while ignoring an essential element of how that adjective is used.
    – TimR
    Commented Jul 16 at 10:47
  • An example of someone who is "old-school" is a woodworker who refuses to use pocket-hole screws but insists on mortise-and-tenon joinery. An example of someone who is "really old-school" is a woodworker who insists on using hand-tools only, no power-tools of any kind. Or a chef who would never use a butane-torch or liquid nitrogen in the kitchen.
    – TimR
    Commented Jul 16 at 10:55

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The original sentence is fine and in fact has its advantages. However, if you still must avoid the repetition of smell, you can consider what I suggested earlier.

You could replace the first smell with another verb or the second one with another noun.

I [sense] the old-school summer smell every time I go there.

I smell the old-school summer [scent (or fragrance)] every time I go there.

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    I think that if you try too hard to avoid repetition you can end up committing the awful sin of 'elegant variation'. In my opinion, 'I smell the old-school summer smell' is fine, and the positive feature of alliteration (all those Ss) outweighs any problem of repetition.
    – Michael Harvey
    Commented Jul 15 at 6:35
  • Thanks, @Michael Harvey for the good point and the phrase elegant variation.
    – Seowjooheng Singapore
    Commented Jul 15 at 7:33

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